初中英語(yǔ)作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改

　　下面的英語(yǔ)句子都是出自<朗文國(guó)際>三冊(cè)和四冊(cè)的學(xué)生作文, 不是病句就是錯(cuò)句. 讓我們用銳利的眼睛, 一起來找茬吧.

　　初中英語(yǔ)作文病句和錯(cuò)句修改

　　1. We have computer class one week a time.

　　2. Go into my school, you can see many flowers.

　　3. There have 100 books.

　　4. I study there very happy.

　　5. I usually swimming there.

　　6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees.

　　7. Several hours after, he was surprised.

　　8. He had to asked the other one.

　　9. He thought he speak well.

　　10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing .

　　11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese.

　　12. This film is very good-looking .

　　13. It is very good to family look.

　　14. I think we can’t live Internet.

　　15. People use the net to send the mails has the most people.

　　16. I have a future dream.

　　17. It can help me to walk on my life road.

　　18. I think everything must be change a lot.

　　19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do.

　　20. But I singing not very well.

　　21. Tom’s mum didn’t care him.

　　22. Almost students use the computer not study.

　　23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net.

　　24. When I was very small.

　　中考滿分英語(yǔ)作文

　　根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文片段。所給詞語(yǔ)必須都用上，中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯，每組英文提示所寫出的句數(shù)不限。

　　今天是6月23日，星期日，天氣晴朗。你和你的同學(xué)張宏參觀了北京動(dòng)物園。那里的動(dòng)物十分有趣，人見人愛。當(dāng)你看到有位游客在向猴子投喂食物時(shí)，就上前阻止并說……

　　請(qǐng)你用英文寫一篇日記，記述今天的經(jīng)歷。(請(qǐng)注意日記格式)

　　參考范文：

　　Sunday ， June 23rd Fine

　　It was a fine day today and the sun was bright . I visited Beijing Zoo with my classmate ， Zhang Hong .

　　The animals there were so interesting that allthe people loved them . When I saw a visitor throwing food to the monkeys ， I went / ran to stop him and said ，“ Animals are our good friends and we must take good care of them .”