托福寫(xiě)作格式：開(kāi)頭空幾個(gè)字符
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托福寫(xiě)作格式：開(kāi)頭空幾個(gè)字符?
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托福作文：深度分析高分寫(xiě)作的關(guān)鍵要素
下面給大家看一位寫(xiě)作21分的同學(xué)寫(xiě)的獨(dú)立作文，這是新東方首考班寫(xiě)作真題中的一篇習(xí)作。附上老師對(duì)這篇作文的批(吐)改(槽)，已更正部分低級(jí)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤，其他原文呈現(xiàn)。
獨(dú)立作文題目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Students now are more interested in politics than those in the past.
With the globalization of the whole world(萬(wàn)能開(kāi)頭稍顯弱，還有whole world這種畫(huà)蛇添足的詞匯，難道后面要分part world寫(xiě)?), politics are playing a more important role nowadays, both domestically and internationally. Thus, I agree that students have more interests in this area than those in the past for two reasons.
First, the advanced technology, such as high-speed Internet, multi-media and smart mobile phone(什么是smart mobile phone，難道有smart phone不能mobile嗎?), allows more students access to the politics events. The technology lay an essential foundament(是foundation吧) for students to keep in touch with those activities. For example, the presidency competition between Hiliton and Trump is getting more dramatic. Lots students(Lots是敗筆) would watch the TV argument between them by phone, portable computer(什么是portable computer，專業(yè)一點(diǎn)就是laptop和ipad吧) and so on(等等等等……考官看中國(guó)考生文章會(huì)出現(xiàn)無(wú)數(shù)so on，審美疲勞有沒(méi)有). They could even(上下句之間有even的遞進(jìn)關(guān)系嗎，不明顯) watch the live program as they are waiting for a bus, share their opinions on the internet while they are in the washroom and hear the speech in their car driving home. Therefore, the convincing efficiency and entertainment attract more and more(這篇作文good肯定是沒(méi)戲了) students to focus on this politic event. However, students in the past even don't know how to watch the program(神轉(zhuǎn)折，腦子里想的和表達(dá)出來(lái)的完全不是一個(gè)意思，過(guò)去的孩子怎么就不知道看電視節(jié)目了!他們又不是弱智!是沒(méi)電視節(jié)目看!是沒(méi)方便的途徑!是However, students in the past lack the plentiful sources to approach politics compared with their counterparts nowadays的意思對(duì)伐).
Moreover, the more open, transparent and friendly(堆這么多形容詞……哎!請(qǐng)注意言之有物!) politic atmosphere provide a great chance for modern students to got involved(時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)了) in these politic activities. Take China for an example(有這種慣用表達(dá)嗎，我們不是莎士比亞), students beyond 18 years old have the right to vote for political members, like chairman of the students union, which were used to be nominated by school in the past without permitting students to decide who they support and are supposed to be chairman(親，這么長(zhǎng)一句話知道自己在寫(xiě)什么嗎?扣分句). This right just inspire the student to choose their own president(這么草草收尾，這論證有點(diǎn)意識(shí)流啊!).
In a conclusion, the advanced equipments and the openess to ordinary studentsthe bring more students to join in the politic events(這什么意思?什么叫openess to ordinary students?難道還有special students?是不是想說(shuō)More students are willing to talk about even participate in political events by the help of advanced technologies and increasing civic attitudes toward politics.).
(計(jì)時(shí)寫(xiě)作，全文274詞)
這篇習(xí)作拿到托?？荚囍?，很難達(dá)到GOOD要求，通俗講就是 " 親，不談?wù)撟C邏輯，不扯思維深度，就是語(yǔ)言，哥讀的有點(diǎn)累啊，有地方要腦補(bǔ)啊，很多句子連不上啊!"
那么一篇good標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的獨(dú)立文章長(zhǎng)什么樣?還是以該題目為例，不改變上文的立場(chǎng)，不顛覆上文邏輯，盡量保持思維角度的一致性，僅從語(yǔ)言和論證嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)度來(lái)修改一下，計(jì)時(shí)創(chuàng)作一篇。
An intriguing phenomenon occurring on and around campus nowadays is that students are more interested in politics than ever before. It is frequent to hear students talking about Obama Care or the latest Presidential Campaign in the United States when dinning in the cafeteria ,say like, Havard or MIT nowadays.
To elaborate, technological advancements improve the readiness of politic access. In the past, society communicates in the form of letters, newspapers and radios with comparatively low efficiency and little convenience. For example, huge political events in China like the escape of once vice-president Lin Biao would not have gotten the attention of American students until many days even weeks later after VOA or CNN have broadcasted it. Even those American students have noticed the incredible political event from newspaper or radio, they have no source to check all the details from Chinese students or friends due to the information barrier between the two countries. In addition, students in the past only shape their perspectives on a political event through authority publications, causing bias in viewing the issue. However, students today can capture every piece of information, political and non-political, just at the time it goes on even on the other side of the globe and receive multiply sources of opinions from government perspective to public statements by the help of the internet, the invention of smart phones and other mobile devices, thanks to the advancement of multi-media technology. These new equipments connecting by the internet makes a strong and close relationship -- "Information Globalization"-- which shattered info barriers and make even the tiniest voice matter. For example, recently in China there is a breaking news that the wife of ChongQing city's mayor, Bo Gukailai, has been prosecuted for causing the death of a British businessman in Beijing. In the past, these "higher class" news will be soon concealed by authorities. But now, students from all over the country can learn about the event only a few hours after "rumors" spread quickly through Wechat or Weibo which left no room for public authority to "hide" any truth but to make a formal announcement and explain the situation.
Also, the spirit of democracy is indeed growing its power not only in developed countries like US but also in developing countries like China even in undeveloped areas. Chinese students are under great supervision and monitoring in the past. As a result, college students are not permitted to talk about political figures or discuss central government policies. Of course, you can "whisper" in the dark, but you know the influence for that. But now, students are free to claim their thoughts about anything and everything even expressing very extreme ideas about politics on the internet just by click a "send" button in Wechat or any similar social APP. At least from what I know, nobody is getting arrested by talking or discussing politics which is so called "the forbidden zone" in the past.
Admittedly, students in schools have little social experiences and usually come up with unrealistic conclusions or solutions about social problems or political events. But it doesn't hurt much to allow students to show bigger interest about it. After all, who rules the next century is always an issue of time, so encouraging students to enroll and learn politics is probably a question of "sooner rather than later" which might be a better way to look at it.
(計(jì)時(shí)寫(xiě)作，全文556詞)
當(dāng)我們回頭去思考托福寫(xiě)作如何獲得高分滿分的時(shí)候?
Is it about the template you would use in test? Is it about fancy words you paraphrase in article? Or is it about something meaningful with correct vocabulary and precise expression throughout the writing? In a word, make sure what you've written MAKES SENSE and let the scorer feel EFFORTLESSwhen glimpsing it through!
高分寫(xiě)作不完全靠背模板，也不完全是抄范文(當(dāng)然這些都有幫助)，真正的高分滿分托福作文要 " 多讀書(shū)多看報(bào)少吃零食多睡覺(jué) "。
寫(xiě)作和口語(yǔ)不能閉門(mén)造車瞎逼練，否則會(huì)永遠(yuǎn)犯同樣的錯(cuò)誤，建議各位考生要么背誦地道的英文詞句表達(dá)，要么找托福口語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作老師陪練(主要是修改習(xí)作)，這些反饋可能比寫(xiě)多少“機(jī)經(jīng)”都重要，至少節(jié)省鉆進(jìn)死胡同重復(fù)犯錯(cuò)的時(shí)間!
托福寫(xiě)作簡(jiǎn)單好用的高分句型：平行結(jié)構(gòu)
我們首先來(lái)欣賞一下美國(guó)的約翰·F·肯尼迪總統(tǒng)所說(shuō)過(guò)的一段話：
Let every nation know, whether it wishes us well or ill, that we shall pay any price, bear any burden, meet any hardship, support any friend, oppose any foe to assure the survival and success of liberty.
這段文字中，所有動(dòng)詞和賓語(yǔ)的形式都是一致的，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔而有力度。
這種將兩個(gè)或者兩個(gè)以上的成分用相同的語(yǔ)言結(jié)構(gòu)表達(dá)在英語(yǔ)中稱為平行結(jié)構(gòu)(Parallelism)。這種結(jié)構(gòu)不但結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，而且語(yǔ)言優(yōu)美，甚至可以包含豐富的情感和風(fēng)格，不但在演說(shuō)中經(jīng)常使用，而且在任何英文考試中，都可以成為提高句子質(zhì)量和表達(dá)水平的終極武器。相反，有些同學(xué)的句子很長(zhǎng)，使用了從句、非謂語(yǔ)等各種復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法，如果結(jié)構(gòu)松散，讓人難以理清頭緒，也不會(huì)被考官視為優(yōu)質(zhì)句子。
其實(shí)絕大多數(shù)中國(guó)學(xué)生其實(shí)都不擅長(zhǎng)寫(xiě)平行句式，這是完全可以理解的。
畢竟除了詩(shī)歌和對(duì)聯(lián)，中文在大多數(shù)情況下都對(duì)結(jié)構(gòu)是否平行沒(méi)有特殊要求，我們依照松散的中文句子翻譯出來(lái)的英文也就很難做到平行了。
" 高校企業(yè)參與了這個(gè)神器的新工具的創(chuàng)造，確保了它的融資，并花費(fèi)時(shí)間時(shí)產(chǎn)品投放市場(chǎng)。" 從中文的角度，幾乎是沒(méi)有毛病的。
但是直接翻譯成英文可能就變成了這個(gè)樣子：The high school entrepreneur was involved in the creation of a new miracle tool, secured financing for it, and spent time getting the product to market. 這個(gè)句子中，"創(chuàng)造"、"融資"和"推廣" 都是由學(xué)校這個(gè)主體發(fā)出，最終對(duì)象都是 "新工具" 的動(dòng)作。
因此我們可以將它改成這樣的平行結(jié)構(gòu)：The high school entrepreneur created, financed, and marketed the new miracle tool. 這個(gè)句子的修改過(guò)程，首先是要有意識(shí)地使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)，其次是在中文上就對(duì)語(yǔ)序作出調(diào)整，最后是明確可以并列的成分，也就是動(dòng)詞。
除了以上的動(dòng)詞，介詞、連詞和冠詞也經(jīng)常能引導(dǎo)平行成分。
我們常用的both ... and、either ... or、neither ... nor和not only ... but also也可以用來(lái)連接平行結(jié)構(gòu)，使用時(shí)要特別注意前后的結(jié)構(gòu)是否完全平行。
接下來(lái)讓我們一起用幾個(gè)句子改錯(cuò)來(lái)練平行結(jié)構(gòu)：
1、 許多年從業(yè)人員面臨兩難問(wèn)題;工作時(shí)為了金錢(qián)還是樂(lè)趣?
原句：A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or work for enjoyment.
平行版：A dilemma facing many young professionals is whether to work for money or to work for enjoyment.
2、這對(duì)于勝利者和那些輸?shù)舻娜藖?lái)說(shuō)都是一個(gè)問(wèn)題。
原句：This could be a problem for both the winners and those who lose.
平行版：This could be a problem for both the winners and the losers.
3、奧林匹克志愿者們做好準(zhǔn)備、完全有能力、下定決心圓滿完成任務(wù)。
原句：Olympic volunteers were ready, filly able, and were quite determined to do a great job.
平行版：Olympic volunteers were ready, able, and determined to do a great job.
4、學(xué)生可以登陸Facebook，花時(shí)間閱讀郵件，瀏覽一些博客推送，然后開(kāi)心地發(fā)微博。
原句：Students can log onto Facebook, spend time reading email messages, review some blog posts, and then tweet with joy.
平行版：Students can check Facebook, read email messages, review blog posts, and then joyfully send tweets.
以上基本的平行結(jié)構(gòu)大家是否都掌握了呢?
在托福作文中，有很多可以使用平行結(jié)構(gòu)的地方。尤其是進(jìn)行過(guò)程描述或者同時(shí)提出多個(gè)細(xì)節(jié)時(shí)，試著把多個(gè)動(dòng)作用同樣的形式表達(dá)出來(lái)，一定會(huì)給考官留下思路清晰、語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔的好印象。同學(xué)們不妨一試。
托福備考范文：痛苦經(jīng)歷對(duì)將來(lái)的價(jià)值
托?？荚囎魑念}目：
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.
托福考試作文參考分析：
舉一些例子支持題目中的觀點(diǎn)，確實(shí)有些痛苦經(jīng)歷對(duì)將來(lái)毫無(wú)幫助。
托福考試作文范文參考：
Some people argue that most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time can later become valuable experiences. I cannot agree with them more. There are numerous reasons why I hold confidence on this opinion, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.
Difficulties are beneficial to our personal growth. In the course of our life, we will face numerous difficulties, and each difficulty will help us grow up, and become a valuable lesson for the future. A toddler fells off the ground for many times before he knows how to walk, and a child learns how to swim after he drinks water in the swimming pool. In addition, only after we experienced failures, we know the value of success. We will never appreciate anything that comes so easy. Difficulties can make us feel stronger and be more confident for the future obstacles.
Furthermore, difficulties in our work can help us gain more experience and knowledge. Most of the times we can gain knowledge and experiences faster through experiencing difficulties in our life and trying to find a solutions to the perplexities that we face. There is a famous saying, "no pain no gain." For example, when we take on a new job that we do not have much experience in, the first few weeks can be extremely painful and we may feel enormous pressure and difficulties. And we will try our best to adjust, to learn and to think, how to do this job better. The more difficulties we feel, the harder we try to acquire the skills and knowledge to overcome it. Learning and this stage is extremely efficient and our problem solving skills well increase. After we overcome more and more problems, we can become an experienced worker in this field and will be able to take on more challenges. We will never fear that we will face the same kind of problem again. This means that we have accumulated valuable experiences for the future.
In a word, a difficult experience is a gift that life gives us. We should appreciate it and take it as a precious opportunity to gain knowledge and experience about our study, work and life.
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