網(wǎng)上購物取代實體店的好處：

　　1)讓人們購物更便捷，節(jié)省時間，買到更滿意的商品

　　2)鼓勵人們買的更多，促進(jìn)經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展

　　網(wǎng)上購物取代實體店的壞處：

　　1)對實體店構(gòu)成威脅，使其經(jīng)營困難

　　2)實體店利潤下降，裁員，減少與供應(yīng)商的生意等

　　范文：

　　The last decade has witnessed the tremendous growth of e-commerce, which is clearly manifested by an increasing number of people shopping online. Gradually, online stores boasting unparalleled advantages have changed people’s purchasing behaviors and tend to replace physical stores. In my mind, this is a positive change in general.

　　Admittedly, online stores’ strong momentum of development will erode the business of traditional stores and even pose threat to their survival. Compared to online stores, physical stores have much higher operation costs, mainly including rents and employee salaries. With too many consumers attracted to online stores, physical ones have to face the decline of business volume. Consequently, due to the shrinkage of business, they have to lay off redundant employees, reduce orders with suppliers and even fail to make payments with business partners. In fact, there are many physical stores that have to struggle on the edge of bankruptcy.

　　However, as online stores can not only play the role of physical stores in both people’s daily life and economic development, but also bring more benefits to social progress, to replace some physical stores is a positive trend. Without leaving home, people are able to make a perfect order by choosing from various kinds of commodities and comparing their prices and performance. Breaking the restriction of time and space, online shopping in fact encourages people to buy more by making it much more convenient and flexible. The increase of people’s purchase will in turn promote economic development by generating job opportunities and tax revenues.

　　To sum up, although the negative impact on physical stores generated by the thriving of online shopping may cause problems in short term, the replacement of physical stores is a positive tendency in general.

　　20171111雅思大作文題目：

　　Online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Is it a positive or negative development?

　　本文作者：Cindy(公眾號：英文寫作素材)

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