怎么改英語作文
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怎么改英語作文
想要體高英語作文寫作水平在原有的基礎(chǔ)上進(jìn)行修改提升是非常有效的辦法,下面小編就跟你們分享下怎么修改英語作文
一、英語作文的等級
四檔文:內(nèi)容不完整,語言表述錯誤很多,不能完整地表達(dá)思想??傻?-2分
三檔文:內(nèi)容完整,重點描述合理,但表述不充分,層次結(jié)構(gòu)不合理,語言不夠流暢,字跡不夠工整,5-6 處語法或拼寫錯誤;字?jǐn)?shù)不足??傻?-5分
二檔文:內(nèi)容完整,重點描述比較充分,層次結(jié)構(gòu)比較清晰,語言比較流暢,字跡工整,有3-4處語法或拼寫錯誤;字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求??傻?-8分
一檔文:內(nèi)容完整,重點描述清楚、合理,表達(dá)充分,層次結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,字跡工整,可讀性強(qiáng),語言流暢,僅有1-2處語法或拼寫錯誤;字?jǐn)?shù)符合要求??傻?-10分
二、英語作文修改案例
案例一:
A Trip to the Zoo
原稿:
Yesterday way Sunday and it was a fine day.So I take a trip to the zoo. I went there by bus, I get there at 8:00 am.There are many people.and some people watched the tigers ,some watched the monkeys, Others watched the bids,I saw many animals and I tool many phtos. That’s a interesting trip. I’ll never forget it. That’s my trip.
修改后:
It was a sunny Sunday After a quick breakfast , I couldn’t wait to get on the bus. This is my first time to enjoy a trip alone. Varions lovebal animals are waiting in the zoo!
As soon as I got there, I was attracted at once. Monkeys were climbing in the tree happily. Sometimes they even came to fetch the bananas in visitors’hands. How naughty they were! What’s more, I was also intersted in the tigers. They are called “the king of animals”,but at this moment they were lying quetly ,maybe they were sleepy. Animals ,humanbeings ,we live in a world .we are family . I t came to my mind immiediatly.
Anyway, I had an interesting trip today . It gave me a deep impression, I’ll never forget it.
案例二:
My favourite season
原稿:
There are four seasons in a year. And my favourite season is summer. Although it’s very hot. I still love it .Because I can swim in the sea .And lie in sun . That’s very comfortable.And I also can eat some Icecreams.they are delicious so there’re lots of thingd to do in summer. That’s very intersting. So I love summer. That’s my favourite season.
修改后
My favourite season
As is all know , there are four seasons. Speaking of my favourite , summer comes first although it is hot.
Many things can be done in summer such as swimming in the sea, Lying on the beach … How comfortable ! More importantly I can eat delicious Icecream . Of course, we also enjoy beautiful views outside. And I’m always looking forward to going fishing with my father .
In a word ,summer is my favourite season because it brings me a lot of happiness .
三、英語作文修改的注意事項
1、整篇文章邏輯的修改.作文的目的是為了表達(dá)東西,所以首先要確保作文表達(dá)的內(nèi)容是清楚并且符合邏輯的,如果段落之間都是矛盾的就說不過去了.
2、語法的修改篇章與段落的修改過后看句子的結(jié)構(gòu),說仔細(xì)了就是語法的修改.
3、還有就是單詞拼寫等小細(xì)節(jié)的修改了.