英語寫作亮點的表現(xiàn)方法
在寫作的時候。我們都是有自己設(shè)下的亮點。但是亮點如果不能凸顯的話。我們的 文章就會讓人感覺平淡無奇,不能吸引別人的眼球,當(dāng)然也就不能得到好的成績,所以今天我們就總結(jié)一下寫作亮點的體現(xiàn)方法。
一、避免重復(fù)使用同一詞語
為了使表達更生動,更富表現(xiàn)力,同學(xué)們在寫作時應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用同一詞語來表示同一意思,尤其是一些老生常談的詞語。如有的同學(xué)一看到“喜歡”二字,就會立刻想起like,事實上,英語中表示類似意思的詞和短語很多,如 love, enjoy, prefer, appreciate, be fond of, care for等。如:
1. I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
→ I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
二、適當(dāng)運用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)
非謂語結(jié)構(gòu)通常被認(rèn)為是一種高級結(jié)構(gòu),適當(dāng)運用非謂語結(jié)構(gòu),會給人一種熟練駕馭語言的印象。如:
1. When he heard the news, they all jumped for joy.
→ Hearing the news, they all jumped for joy.
聽了這消息他們都高興得跳了起來。
2. As I didn’t know her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
→ Not knowing her address, I wasn’t able to get in touch with her.
由于不知道她的地址,我沒法和她聯(lián)系。
3. As he was born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.
→ Born into a peasant family, he had only two years of schooling.
他出生農(nóng)民家庭,只上過兩年學(xué)。
三、合理使用省略句
合理恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂檬÷跃?,不僅可以使文章精練、簡潔,而且會使文章更具文采和可讀性。如:
1. He may be busy. If he’s busy, I’ll call later. If he is not busy, can I see him now?
→ He may be busy. If so, I’ll call later. If not, can I see him now?
他可能很忙,要是這樣,我以后再來拜訪。要是不忙,我現(xiàn)在可以見他嗎?
2. If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If it is not fine, we’ll not go.
→ If the weather is fine, we’ll go. If not, not.
如果天氣好,我們就去;如果天氣不好,我們就不去了。
3. She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t do so.
→ She could have applied for that job, but she didn’t.
她本可申請這份工作的,但她沒有。
四、靈活改變句子開頭
在通常情況下,英語句子的排列方式為“主語+謂語+賓語”,即主語位于句子開頭。但若根據(jù)情況適當(dāng)改變句子的開頭方式,比如使用倒?fàn)钫Z或以狀語開頭等,會使文章增強表現(xiàn)力。如:
1. There stands an old temple at the top of the hill.
→ At the top of the hill there stands an old temple.
在小山頂上有一座古廟。
2. You can do it well only in this way.
→ Only in this way can you do it well.
只有這樣你才能把它做好。
3. A young woman sat by the window.
→ By the window sat a young woman.
窗戶邊坐著一個年輕婦女。
4. The door opened and Mr Smith came in.
→ The door opened and in came Mr Smith.
門開了,史密斯先生走了進來。
寫好一篇英語文章,不能只靠枯燥的詞匯,也要注意文章內(nèi)容的設(shè)計,希望大家在寫作的過程中能夠提高的更多。