很多雅思考生都存在雅思寫(xiě)作問(wèn)題，而開(kāi)頭的寫(xiě)作是最主要的錯(cuò)誤之一，有的考生開(kāi)頭過(guò)分啰嗦，有的考生中式英語(yǔ)痕跡太濃，甚至還有一些考生如偏離軌道無(wú)軌電車一樣侃侃而談，不明所以，語(yǔ)法詞匯錯(cuò)誤一大堆，實(shí)在不忍直視。小編整理了十大錯(cuò)誤的寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭，希望能夠?qū)忌膹?fù)習(xí)有所幫助，大家在平時(shí)的復(fù)習(xí)備考中一定不能再犯這些錯(cuò)誤。

　　雅思寫(xiě)作開(kāi)頭10大誤區(qū) 來(lái)看看你是否躺槍

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之一：過(guò)分啰嗦型(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic 1-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……

　　修改方案：開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山 直奔主題

　　In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married.

　　Topic 2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information? (雅思真題)

　　Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.

　　Topic 3-The importance of environmental protection

　　Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之二：中式英文人見(jiàn)人暈(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life

　　In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……

　　Topic 2- The population problem

　　The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

　　Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?

　　I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get “baoying”.

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之三：觀點(diǎn)模糊態(tài)度曖昧 (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之四：偏離主題無(wú)軌電車(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? (雅思真題)

　　I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之五：語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤慘不忍睹 (噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?(雅思真題)

　　About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之六：過(guò)分簡(jiǎn)單沒(méi)有重點(diǎn)(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic-The importance of environmental protection

　　This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之七：用詞不當(dāng) 表達(dá)不準(zhǔn)(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?

　　I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之八：意思重復(fù)原地踏步(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic-Your opinion on DINK families

　　My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之九：中國(guó)俗語(yǔ)胡亂翻譯(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic 1-Is it good to have a large family?

　　I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence: “Many sons, many lucks”……

　　正確說(shuō)法：Happiness lies in having many children

　　Topic 2 -Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?

　　We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said: “Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……

　　Topic 3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?

　　Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……

　　Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person

　　I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say: “Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.

　　“見(jiàn)官死”開(kāi)頭之十： 觀點(diǎn)武斷態(tài)度強(qiáng)硬(噴血指數(shù)：☆☆☆)

　　典型失敗案例：

　　Topic1-The importance of confidence

　　In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.

　　Topic 2 - The solution to the traffic problem

　　I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.

　　雅思寫(xiě)作詞匯量不足如何入手

　　通過(guò)對(duì)雅思寫(xiě)作了解官方范文，不難發(fā)現(xiàn)，雅思寫(xiě)作是圍繞教育、社會(huì)、環(huán)境等大眾話題展開(kāi)的。在語(yǔ)言表達(dá)方面，更多強(qiáng)調(diào)用詞的準(zhǔn)確和多變，而不是考查用詞的專業(yè)和難度，因此考生在備考的時(shí)候，可以按照相關(guān)話題進(jìn)行詞匯的梳理，既可以是別人已經(jīng)整理好的，也可以是自己從閱讀各類話題范文中摘錄出來(lái)的。這些詞匯跟雅思寫(xiě)作緊密相關(guān)，有話題語(yǔ)境為背景，又加以合理歸類，所以遺忘率會(huì)較低而利用率則較高。而對(duì)于話題中的少數(shù)專業(yè)詞匯，建議視時(shí)間和能力，量力而行，可以明確，沒(méi)有專業(yè)詞匯，雅思寫(xiě)作照樣可以拿七分。

　　另一方面，雅思寫(xiě)作和其他考場(chǎng)作文一樣，受考查形式的制約，其評(píng)判本身是存在一定局限性的。換句話說(shuō)，考官并不了解考生真實(shí)的寫(xiě)作能力，或者具體到詞匯量的大小，他只能根據(jù)這幾百個(gè)單詞的文章來(lái)進(jìn)行判斷，所以從應(yīng)試的角度來(lái)說(shuō)，詞匯量相對(duì)有限的考生只要使文章中詞匯“顯得比較豐富”就可以了。想要做到這點(diǎn)，推薦給考生以下兩個(gè)方法：

　　第一、同義轉(zhuǎn)換

　　設(shè)想碰到一個(gè)懂中文的外國(guó)人，他在和你交談的過(guò)程中涉及到錢(qián)的話題，他不光會(huì)說(shuō)中文的人民幣、鈔票，還會(huì)說(shuō)大團(tuán)結(jié)、老人頭，甚至連孔方兄都知道，你會(huì)覺(jué)得他的中文詞匯量小么?同樣的，一篇雅思作文中，如果你在表達(dá)“重要”這個(gè)出現(xiàn)頻率極高的意思的時(shí)候，除了important以外，還可以把crucial,critical,vital,indispensable等詞信手拈來(lái)的話，有什么理由讓考官覺(jué)得你的詞匯量不足呢，當(dāng)然，或許你也就只積累了幾個(gè)寫(xiě)作中高頻出現(xiàn)的詞匯而已，但效果已經(jīng)達(dá)到了，不是么?

　　第二、詞匯活用

　　雅思寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)中，對(duì)于詞匯的適當(dāng)應(yīng)用有一定的分?jǐn)?shù)標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。閱讀一些雅思官方范文，可以看到，很多詞不難，但是用得很恰當(dāng)，自己以前沒(méi)有這樣用過(guò)，這就是范文的高明之處了。詞匯量一方面是指認(rèn)知詞匯的廣度，但另一方面就是掌握詞匯的深度了。很多詞匯，我們認(rèn)識(shí)，但不一定完全會(huì)用，比如benefit這個(gè)詞，它既可以做名詞，表示利益，好處，也可以做動(dòng)詞，及物時(shí)表示使……受益，不及物時(shí)表示從……中受益，還可以衍生出beneficial有益處的和beneficiary受益人。因此如果要表達(dá)某事物帶來(lái)好處這個(gè)意思，光用benefit這個(gè)詞的不同用法，就可以有五種以上的表達(dá)方式，更不用提句型的變化和同義詞的替換了。況且，把已經(jīng)認(rèn)知的詞進(jìn)行用法上的拓展，遠(yuǎn)比記憶一個(gè)新詞要省時(shí)省力，而需要做的僅僅只是平時(shí)碰到的時(shí)候，記上一筆。